lol It was a very funny little fiction. I really liked the idea with the Answering Machine.
Makes me think my family is lucky not to have one.
Still, I wonder who burped at Makoto all the time, would love to know that...OH! The suspense of it XD.
Anyway, hope you write more things!
Author's response
Thank you very much for the review! I write things all the time, and the Sailormoon universe is fun to play around with every now and then, so I might very well write more about the short-skirted teens sometime... after I've finished the current stories I'm working on, that is (two Harry Potter and one Ninja Turtles).
I never actually decided on the mysterious burper's identity. But for some reason, I envision a random twelve-year-old boy who thinks he's being hilariously funny. It's not one of the canon characters, I can tell you that. ^_^