Thanks very much for the re-post. This version didn't cause a translation headache. Can you give an estimate for when to expect the next one?
P.S: As it is now about 2:30 AM, I'll try to re-review with appropriately articulated sympathies and chapter 6 & 7 comments some time this afternoon or evening. Right now, though, I need sleep.
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You're welcome. I'd actually had the chapter ready and was waiting for the maintenance to get done, and I posted it almost immediately, so I fuess not all of the bugs were worked out on the site, and the formatting was completely messed up.
Next one should be out this weekend - I've transcribed it from Taylor's notebook to a Word document, and right now it's been sent off to my beta, so I expect to get it back today or tomorrow.