ok,
well i just read them all
coz i was bored as and trying to avoid doin my biol assignment
here goes- theyre ok
not great but theyre pretty good
a few of the chapters are WAY too short and nothing happens in them
also try and make the plot line a lil more realistic...
im just trying to give pointers
hope u realise its constructive critiscism im not trying to b mean...
lol keep it up darl it'll get there
xoxo
Author's response
hahaha.... yea i realised that... my friend said the same..
that was my first fic and i understand you lol
but thanks for letting me know...
i cant even b bothered with that fic so i'm gonna delete it anyway lol
xx