You really write truly astonishingly. Your plot is so well developed and.....happy (^^;;). Very good read. I don't have an criticism for you..o_0 Your grammar is impecable. Perfect. It makes me happy...^^ Keep writing!
Author\'s Response: thank you so much for your encouraging review. er, i do hope the story doesn't give you any reason to change your opinion as it progresses. again, thanks so much! ^_^