nice to the blacks are the brains behind the malfoys. i still don't like draco, and ron. there both extremes in their views and idiocy.
otherwise, i liked this on a whole, nice to see the idea of summer-school...
and a smart and thoughtful harry, who knew... who would expect a abused and belittled child, to be clever and very much slytherin like, yet at the same time, wanting to make his parents proud... this is probably the biggest reason, i don't agree with JK.
anyway, congrats, and nice choice of families as well...