I am really enjoying the twists and turns of this story. This is a very interesting take on Harry, as well as some of the other characters. I do hope you'll be updating frequently!
Unrelated question: you indicate that English isn't your first language, but don't say what is. Are you, by any chance, Polish? I ask because you write like a friend of mine who is Polish speaks -- omitting articles (a, an, the) before nouns sometimes and a few other things, as well.