I'm really excited to read what happens with her and Brendon. I'd agree with pyrotechnicist to a certain extent that maybe it would have been more interesting to have her reveal her past to Brendon in short pieces or something, but I like that you are approaching it differently. It's good that you're writing it in a different way so that it's not boring. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story and the uncovering of all of her past ;) Keep writing and update soon!
--i also like the character page, because if I ever get lost in the story, I can go back and refresh my memory, good idea! :D--