Love it.
"Oh yeah, it really looks like a shark to me" said Archie sarcastically "I think I'll call him Flipper"
lol that line made me laugh so hard i fell off my chair (ok it really was funny and i am tired).
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Hehe, we love Neils beach ball, it made us laugh. But we dont this he would have wanted to go after it so bad, but still it did make us laugh. So did Archie and callling the sea serpent flipper. Update soon!
Author's response
ah, thankyou princess and princess' gummie bear. i'm very glad you enjoyed it- you were the first ones to read that chapter- did you know that? you do now!