hey this fic is pretty good.
um i have to say... a little too much descriptive
but otherwise it was fine.
update soon if possible please
xoxox
pyrotechnicist
Author's response
Thats one of the problems with writing, everyone wants something different, some like the detail, others don't , some want romance others want action etc, as a writer I have to try to create a balance and do the best I can to please everyone.
Keep reading and reviewing
GuardianOfLight