Your writing is excellent as always. However, I still have the same problems that I always do.
Cannon Hermione is a prude, plain and simple.
Now don't take that the wrong way, I really like her character. Yet all your fics have her as some sort of progressive nudist or something like that.
I don't have a problem with nudist or threesomes, foursomes, anything like that. As a matter of fact I prefer that in HP fics.
I also like to see Hermione in those types of fics, the only thing I find hard to belive is that she is the one iniatating them. i.e. I think cannon Hermione would freak out if Luna ever came on to her.
I just think that Hermione shouldn't be the instigator in these situations, she should be the one that has to be talked into it.
My next problem is the relationships themselves, they are never really equal. Harry, who may start off being in love with Luna, and she with him, bring Hermione into the fold. Yet, by the time the fic ends, your fics always have an undertone of the two females being more in love with each other, and that Harry is just there to provide a penis when they get excited.
Then there are other things. Harry, being a 35 year old virgin.....unrealistic in the extreme. And yet somehow, the most prudish "canon" character (Hermione), has been banging away since her fifth year or some such.
At any rate, I still enjoy your writting, I always have.