Wow, I can't believe there is only one Invisible Man story on this site, but I'm very glad that it is yours. :)
This is a wonderful story! It is well written and reads smoothly, facts blending in well with the plot. You do a nice job of showing off the friendship between Bobby and Darien as well as expressing the dificulty Claire faces between the dueling roles of 'keeper' and 'friend'. All the while there was also a plot. :)
Wonderful!
Maybe think about writing another story for this seriously under appriciated category?
~Oro
Author's response
I actually have written a couple of other I-Man stories, but I only posted this one because it was the one I was happiest with. The others were VERY early efforts and showed my inexperience.
I was going to point you to where I had them archived, but realized that it had been so long that the archive is gone. So maybe I'll put the other two fics up here soon, just to have them up somewhere.