i like the switch in person =(.... lol
but hey... it's your story after all. write it how you want to write it. you shouldn't ever write for anyone else...
and im not just saying that because i like the voice... im saying it because it was some of the best advice ever given to me and i thought it'd be nice to pass it on =) (y)
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Yup I know, but you guys are reading it. Thanks.