both were great
i'm sorry about before though haha, it's not like you ever surprised us, you had the lines. i'll conform and pick 1, completely up to you and yea :)
oh, and i liked this: "lackadaisically"
heehee, funn use of language =)
Author's response
Why are you sorry? If everyone just went yeah I like ths story update, how boring would that be?
I would normally say never conform! but cause I like version one I'll say good choice!
Yeah I like that word.