i noticed that kyler says that AFI is his favorite band not MCR is it supossed to be like that? you should consider getting a beta to check your storiy before you post it it might help. im no good at that though i make to many errors myself. i love the storyline though and its something diffrent then the regular slash. origionality makes for the best stories
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haha thank you
once again me and my friends were talking and i accidently typed into the story