Hey I like your story, but chapter 4 is either missing or you were messing around! I also like the way you use the flamels and I have seen about 3 stories other than this one where he was raised by the flamels either partly of fully, but your right it is rare compared to all the other stories.
I also like the way you have portrayed his attitude it seems to be so honest with the way he grew up and to have his eyeballs regrown and have them fix his eyes so he doesnt need glasses anymore, where can I sign up for this!
It does seem rather odd that perenelle would let a 10 yr old like Harry wander off though!
I also like your view of dumby. I dont think he's evil but he isnt exactly light either. I think he is a pacifist and he clearly sees a world that he wants to mould but nobody else would really want if they knew the whole plan!
definitely going to be on the lookout for furhter updates.
Author's response
Thanks for letting me know that chapter four was gone! It took me forever to get it back--no idea what happened. It's up now though!
I suppose that Harry is simply a rather special ten year old...Also, Perenelle and Nicholas haven't exactly taken parenting 101.
Thanks again for reviewing!