Hello there you have to finish this story. I just found this story and read it all the way through today. You can't just give up. You are a very good writer and I love the plot its so much better than some of the ones that I have seen. True the may be better writers out there, but a lot of them use the same story line which gets boring no matter now ell you write. Believe me when I say there is always going to be bigger and better things out there, but you can't give up because your story is unique and I just spent the whole day reading it. Its really good. So, I hope you get inspired and finish this because if you let something like this affect you in finishing a story or not imagine what it will be like in school, work, and life period. Your story does not suck if it did so many people wouldn't have read it or posted comments. You have to finish this for yourself and for them.