This story is genius. Listen, hear that steadily slowing beat? That's my heart! UPDATE IF YOU DON'T WANT ME TO DIE!
I'm a drama queen at times, ignore please. You have an amazing writing style, all you need now is a confidence booster. You say at the end of your chapters "This chapter sucks" or something along those lines. Well dear, I haven't found a single thing wrong in all eight of these chapters. I might not be the best judge but all I can do is say what's on my mind. Great writing.
Author's response
LOL! A very charming drama queen, I might add.
Yeah, I know. I have little confidence, but your reviews helps it increase! Thank you oh-so much for the marvelous reviews.