Man this is one hell of a story! Since reading it last week sometime it has rapidly advanced to be my favorite hp story on the net! I love the way you write and by the way did I mention that you are one hell of a writer as well as an even better storyteller. And most of all the way you write the sex scenes...well take it this way I'm a old fart late 40's and the sex scenes that you have written with gabrielle and the others have definitely got my blood...uh attention going!
I know you stated in your summary I beleive that you dont really care that much for reviews and your just writing this for yourself, well please what ever you do please make yourself finish it! this is way to damn good to just walk away from like so many other writers have done to there own stories! with that said I would like to say THANK YOU for one hell of a fun time reading, oh to be young again and to have a willing veela like gabrielle!