Wow. This is really excellent, and I like it a lot, particularly the parallels between their two thought processes. You bring out the duality of Cecil and Kain very well. However, I'm not sure the Cain/Abel comparison really works because there is no indication that the world of FF4 embraces and uses the Judeo-Christian religious tradition. The reader certainly gets it, but since you've written in the "voice" of Kain and Cecil, I'm not sure it really fits. Still, you do a great job of exploring their mental images of each other after the game. Very nice!