Review for System of Touch

System of Touch

(#) RyokoJesse 2007-10-15

I love InoShikaChou. fantastic work, and such depth for Ino...I really feel like her character is cheated in the show, and I love what you've done here. Gorgeous piece of work. I love "tell me baout my body", and the small details given to her. the image of shikamaru's calloused hands is AMAZINGLY hot, and the bit about "the most vulnerable spot on a woman" was really something that tied her canon character in and made this fic believable. I loved it.