Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) Cateagle 2007-10-21

-chuckle- Trust Luna to be a helping and valuable friend. I wonder how many others they have that'll be showing up. OTOH, Tonks has firmly placed herself in the "Enemy-Dumble's Stooge" camp and I loved Harry's approach to getting her out of his way; he really understands the Goblins better than he thinks. His dealings with the Bank Manager certainly show a basic respect and a reasonable amount of understanding and I especially loved the "incentive fee" for the finder teams; I rather suspect that's going to leave some -very- unhappy individuals.

The bit with Hermione and her parents was good, their, and his, determination to protect her conflicting with her desire to be with and protect him; she's determined enough, we know how that's going to end.

Author's response

I'm working on some of the repo scenes now. Molly is going to be especially upset...

In another fic I have Harry asking himself if he has ever won an arguement with Hermione...