(#) lychi 2007-10-21
Wow, this was a great read! I never read fics about Kadaj, Yazoo, and Loz, but because of this I warmed up immensely to them, especially Loz.
I like how you wrote Zack and Sephiroth's characters, and how you conveyed their personality through their thoughts and actions when dealing with the the three of them.
I really like your writing style, and you were able to convey a lot of emotion in even scenes that did not bluntly try to do so.
Keep it up!