I enjoyed your one shots and Trademark Dispute, and I am finding this tale interesting as well.
However there is one thing I do not understand, nor am all that fond of. That being your recap of the the last scene of the prior chapter in each new chapter. It's like a speed bump. Not a major thing, I've learned to just skip forward to the first break and then pick up reading there. But you're the writer so do what you want, as long as you're happy I can work around it. I appreciate you putting these stories out here and I thank you for them.
Author's response
Thanks.
Others have mentioned not liking the recaps, they're done.