insert snarky comment from Snape about attention seeking brats here
Excellent update. I like the restraint you showed with the smut, as well as Hermione's jealous reaction. Looking forward to more.
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I always feel silly attempting to write a sex scene, but they are an important part of the story...
The various multiship fics that have hermione alright with another girl always strike me as flawed. Not the way she is likely to have been raised...