I agree with "T," great setup. I can hardly wait for the confrontations with the White Bumblebee, and selectively assorted Weasels.
Any confrontation with Malfoy will be like Bambi vs. Godzilla.
Nice job working through the polyamory issue - I agree, Hermione (Church of England upbringing) would have "sharing" issues. Putting her in sync with her sister-wife was brilliant.
Write on, write on!
N!
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Actually a certain greasy bat takes the first hit...
Other than making hime wet his pants, I don't know if I'm doing all that much with Malfoy... Maybe I'll let Daphne abuse him some, she needs a hobby.
I was going to gloss over the likely hood of Hermione emotionally accepting another woman in Harry's bed (staying completely away from the patented 'sure to get you kicked where it hurts' question of the two of them in the same bed just like just about every other multi ship fic does, but I wanted the ritual, so that I could have the girls privy to the Greek Chorus in Harry's head the telepathy angle isn't going to be used much. They can talk to him, but not each other, though each can hear what the other says to Harry. He can't talk to either of them telepathically (though his dreams and greek chorus comes through), he can sense their emotional states, they cannot sense his or each others.
Goofy huh?