Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) DobbyElf 2007-10-30

Very nice setup, I have to agree. I like the development of the threesome but I loved the Ernie and Justin interaction at the club. It was nice to see the other students acting as adults for a change and using their own minds.

Author's response

Thanks. I'm trying to bring in more than the core cast. It amazes me how insulated this school is both in canon and in fics, I mean they constantly have references to not knowing someone who is in their own year (hell, I've done it my self in this fic, but my reasoning (Daphne the perfect unobtainable Ice Princess of Slytherin at least is a person that a basically shy kid like Harry would never approach) My class in High school had 483 people in it, I could (at the time) put names to faces for a majority of my class. Harry's year at Hogswarts is fewer than 50 people, and there are class mates he doesn't know? WTF?