Review for Bella Rising

Bella Rising

(#) dadscooking 2007-11-02

Nice story so far. I have read everything I can find by your talented hand. You are my favorite professor. I do have one small construtive criticism. The chapters seem short and it makes the story go by so fast. This is a ride I want to go on for a while.

Anxiously watching for updates...


Author's response

Thank you for the kind words of encouragement.
My chapters tend to be short so that I may update more often. Longer chapters take longer to write; having said that, I'll work on it.
There are elements to the story and characters that I haven't introduced yet - this one may go long. . .