I like your solution to the dementor problem, it might be the best I've ever seen. Probably is, since most authors don't bother to have Harry strike deals with them.
Also, the conversation with Hermione was excellent. I hope to see more of those two in the future.
Poor Fred, George and Oliver. They really have no idea...
Author's response
Thanks, glad you liked the idea. It comes from the attraction Harry seems to have as far as dementors are concerned.
"T"