H O L Y S H I T
I have never seen a story like this before. Your characterization is steady and believable, the description is unreal, and the action is beyond words. The slight crossover that you have here is something I wish there was more of, one where Naruto isn't a shinigami and there are merely elements of Bleach in the story. In addition, your character interaction is superb, as is your spelling and grammer. Overall, this is one of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I can't wait for more.