mmkay, so I just found this fanfic, even though you finished it like half a year ago. :/ I just got finished reading it over the past four days (the length is quite unique. lol) but I loved every second of it. I didn't really want to review on every chapter, but I did feel a little guilty when you were begging for reviews. Hopefully this final one will make up for all of the other ones I neglected (note that it's going to be a long ramble of incoherent opinions. proceed if you're willing.) haha.
I really loved the story. Every twist and turn in the plot seemed to flow really well and everything seemed so well planned.
The relationship between the characters was very well written. I liked how you displayed several different types of relationships and everyone wasn't just "we're such happy -insert type of relation here-". (does that make any sense at all?) The progression of Pete and Molly's relationship was the best in my opinion. I thought I would get fed up with their constant bickering, but the fact that they matured enough to be really good friends seemed very natural and amazing to me.
The drama was thick, but not too overbearing. I still had hope throughout it that everything would work out well, and I think that was through the determination that your characters displayed. I know they wouldn't give up too easily. The ending was AMAZING, in my opinon. I can't put into words how happy I was that Molly and Patrick wound up together (although I was suspecting it all along, some people take pride in making their leading (supposed) star-crossed lovers end heartbroken.)
all in all, this was a very well written story in every aspect that I can think of. I really enjoyed reading it, and I can't wait to venture over to your artist page and start reading the sequel in a few minutes. haha.
'Twas awesome. Keep up the writing.