Marvellously done!!!!!! I liked seeing the beginnings of Charlie and May's relationship! It also looks as though May's father will approve of his future son-in-law. I look forward to the next part of the story, and enjoyed seeing the attraction the two had for each other. I think that they will be friends, lovers, and beloved in time.......smiles. Thanks for the chapters!
Author's response
Thanks Teresa! I have four more chapters to expand upon and upload, then there will be at least two more that I am still writing. This story was a lot of fun to create. The Dragon Preserve is a wonderful playground for a writer.
--Jim