Aw, ah-dorable chapter. But I kind of felt exactly like JoeTroh did when Mel said she had a boyfriend. It's like...I was attempting to ask her out and then just figured out she wasn't single. That sounds queer...uh...You described Joe's character well, is what I'm trying to get at. And hopelessly failing.
I love playing with little kids. I get to act dumb and no one thinks I really am. It is the shiz. But seriously, little kids are adorable. Yet, I never want one of my own. Patrick would be an aweome dad, though.
Great chapter, and I know exactly what you mean about XxIceCreamHeadachexX's reviews. They make ME very very hapy inside too.
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You said the shiz! =].
Thank you for such an amazing, supportive, long review!