The higher the flight, the more successful the clutch. hehe.
I like your Charlie. It's the first time I'm reading a Charlie character written by a male writer, and I think I'm going to enjoy reading this story.
The Archer sounds intriguing, or is it because she's seen through Charlie's eyes? lol. He seems to find her enthralling.
Her dragon acts more like a Pernese dragon than like any of those we've seen in the Potterverse, but I don't mind. I guess the story will tell about that particular relationship between man/woman and beast.
Nicely done - yep, it was really sweet and original!
-Anne