OH I like very much!!! A very inventive use of memories. And such memories, Rather than show a beautiful woman how beautiful he thought she was he showed her his life. Opening himself even more to her. Nice very nice.
Congratulations this is a masterpiece in the making.
Scruffy
Author's response
Thank you very much, Scruffy! I always enjoy trying to find new ways of using older ideas. I'm glad you liked the story. I hope to have some brand new chapters soon.
--Jim