Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-11-19

Pretty good update. I'm a bit weirded out by Dumbledore's immediate jump to Neville. I get that he's desperate, but recreating the prophecy's circumstances for him won't be easy.

Looking forward to more.

Author's response

It's just your standard case of old men sending young men off to war for the Greater Good...