Review for The Priss and the Idiot

The Priss and the Idiot

(#) phonet 2006-07-18

Well this is rather nit-picky but in number 4 you wrote:

“Byakuya detest any mess.”

Should it not be Byakuya detested any mess (es)?

Well I wanted to call it to your attention, and other than that the story is magnificent. Love the Kaien, Byakuya friendship, quite original from what I’ve seen.