I love this story! You do a great job of describing details and saying what everyone's thinking in a not confusing way. Plus, you can't go wrong with a little sexual tension right? CAN I GET AN AMEN??!?! Ok, or not.... But yes, great story, can't wait till next chapter!!!
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Author's response
haha. or YES. i'd amen to that. obv, i like it. =D yes, sometimes it's hard writing for six people. =P i'll have the next chapter up as soon as i can. thanks so much.