I too found myself worrying about the "home universe." Perhaps Neville can take the helm and become the next hero of the wizarding world.
See, I've been drawn into this story. In my opinion the mark of a good story is the abilty to make your readers care about your characters.
Well done.
Good job builing the matriarchal society - are you channeling Ursula K. LeGuin at all?
On the subject of twin cores, ponder this.
Harry and Harri have twin magical cores in addition to the phoenix cores in their matching wands.
Could be an interesting plot device.
Please update soon.
N!
Author's response
The Home universe won't be a focus of this story... Perhaps a sequel...
Thank you.
Actually I've read little LeGuin, she never did it for me
I was wondering what would happen if if the 'brother wands' thing happened with a set of triplets....