Hi Jim! I'm not sure I already said so in a review... I think you're doing a very good job with your writing of the Dragon Preserve and the world of dragons inside the Potterverse. I do like the little world you have created here. A lot. :)
As always, your descriptions are superb and give me the feeling that I can 'see' those places. And the cave with the spring seems an inviting place.
You do love the Weasleys and it shows. You give even more depths to them all than JK Rowling did. I liked all the memories, and especially the one with Ginny. Oh, and why could Fawkes see May?
It's a beautiful chapter, full of emotions. There is so much love and tenderness between Charlie and May. At the beginning, it was steamy, and then it made me go all "aww..." when he shared his memories with her.
Good job!
-Anne