I don't really look at other's reviews. This story, so far, is quite uncomfortable, and seems to be heading towards a matrarchal(sp), society, where the males are docile. I look forward to an update, but I'm curious how you'll achieve HP/LL without slash.
Author's response
Docile? No, just treated and react as women are and do in our (Harry's) society.
Luna is a girl. (I checked)