(#) SotF 2007-11-23
The story is still interesting, however the pacing seems to have started to accelerate which makes me feel like there ought to be more in the last couple chapters. It is still a fun read and I'm waiting for more.
Author's response
I just reread the last three chapters each of which cover a day or part of one.
Chapter 10 - Friday Sept 1, the Welcoming Feast and aftermath,
Chapter 11 - Saturday Sept 2, Ginny got abused, Draco and Snape got schooled, Dumbles was put on notice, and Minnie got Hermione's side of the story.
Chapter 12 - Sunday Sept 3, Neville got teased, The Twins confront Molly, Tonks ran home to mommy, Remus reflected, Minerva slapped the youngest Weasley's down, Hermione confronted Ron, Dumbles and Andromeda Tonks, Tommy tries to figure Harry out, and Dumbles plots his emergency back up plan
A fair amount took place, but I dont' really see the acceleration, nor what wholes need to be filled in. What in particular are you referring to?