Review for Second Fiddle

Second Fiddle

(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-11-25

OK, I have to say that this chapter was absolutely unbelievable. You bring Harry to a werewolve village where he's revealed as a twilight wolf, and then the whole village says, "We don't believe you." Rather than have him transform and prove his case you walk it off with a bit of sarcasm. Bad form, really. It's more of a delaying tactic than anything else. You have a claim that Harry beat the Dark Lord in a duel but again no witnesses and a claim of "Believe me! I heard it from a friend who was supposedly there." I hope that the story clears up in the next coming chapters.

Geovanni Luciano

Author's response

Harry hasn't mastered his gift yet. Hopefully, the next chapters answered some of your questions.