This next chapter is going to be pretty brutal. Don't get me wrong, I'm really eager to see Ron get the skin flayed from his bones, but I'm thinking more of Neville at this point. I wonder if you'll have it take effect for a while like it did with Harry before one of them sees the signs and helps him out. Should be interesting to see.
The list of people that need to pay grows and grows...
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