I've read this story before, and liked it. The style is close enough to DWJ's to keep everyone in character, and original enough to allow for slash.
Also, the way "the earth moved"? Such a perfect result for the slash, especially with the punishments.
Author\'s Response: Ah, thank you. I'm a frothing fan of DWJ; saying I got even close to her style sends me over the moon and into orbit. :)