This chapter had everything! The romantic bit at the start was really sweet, but I couldn't believe Gerard called her a bitch, especially to defend Liz.
It was really sad when she found the hate community, and started by that girl who she helped out, that must have hurt. You described her reaction so well.
The bit at the end was worrying! It makes me worry what's going to happen next...
But the comments at the end by Ray and Gerard about fan fiction were so funny!
Great chapter, you just get better and better, can't wait for the next one now! You're nearly at 100 chapters!
Author's response
oh yeah i know! can you believe it?! 100 chapters?! i thought that i wasn't gonna make it past ten and here we are...100 chapters already!