Yeah I'm about halfway done with chapter six and noticed a re-occuring mistake in the french that you're using. When Remus is calling women "Mon Ami" he should be saying "Ma Amie" because that is the femine singular form of the verb and possive pronoun. That only bothers me because I just took French 3 Honors at the end of last school year. I would guess from this and other mistakes that I have spotted that you used an online translator right. I'm really enjoying your story, and I thought that you might want to know that. I'm also pretty sure that there are some other errors in your french but it is rather late(2:31 am) so I might have missed them.