sorry i'm late. i've had no access to the internet in the past few days.. or wait, maybe a week? this chapter was indescribeably (i've no idea how to spell that) amazing. i started reading the old chapters and you can totally see the improvement. you were already great back then but now you're on a whole different level.
i liked the staring part in tihs chap. the way she suddenly noticed ti wasn't "her" gerard or the "old gerard" staring back at her, and i wouldn't be suprised if gerard was thinking about the same thing when he was staring blankly at her.