Review for When Vernon Didn't Miss

When Vernon Didn't Miss

(#) koppe 2007-12-08

Great story so far.
I particularly liked Harry claiming Hermione as family... wonder what practical (and perhaps magical) consequences that will bring in the future.
Ginny isn't possessed here, is she? Anyway, I hope Ginny and Hermione -- and perhaps Harry -- comes to some sort of understanding regarding their relationship, and who has a claim on Harry. Personally I wouldn't mind a threeway (or more -- Luna, and maybe others) relationship, but sense that is not in the card for this story.
Ron seemes more oblivious than usual and seems to be drifting away from Harry and Hermione. Although I loved (and laughted loudly) when Ron was caught after three hours in the kitchen.
Will Harry put that fake Lockhart in his place? I also hope he'll put Snape and the Malfoys in their place.
Keep up the great work.

Author's response

Ginny isn't possessed yet, just being slightly drawn back to the diary.

Hary has more to worry about than Lockhart. Gilderoy didn't realize teaching was such hard work, though. As for Snape and Lucius . . . one will be dealt with.

Ron is more oblivious -- Harry and Hermione aren't carrying his lazy butt around as much.