The Eragon explanation? Who cares. You are aware that you are writing fan fiction, and a cross-over bit at that, yeah? :) Sorry my bit for Gordon Ramsey. When he's not dropping the F bomb it's yeah at the end of angry or frustrated sentences. Good show on this chapter. Makes me wonder about the phoenix necklace and possibly some hidden form of betrayal? Just thinking aloud, mind.
Geovanni Luciano