I don't know how far I am through this story, but i will have finished it by the end of today, (and start 'Dark Lady' Tomorrow.
Ok, it's a good story I like it fully except for one thing:
THE QUEEN! Ok, she was ok the first time she appeared, when she made Harry the Duke of Magic, But after that she was just an annoying charracter that played no important part of the story, (she may do later) all she did was go round smile at everyone (the occasional laugh also) and knight people. The charrecter has gotten so annoying I want to stop reading everytime she is mentioned :| the only reason I keep reading is because the rest of the story is compelling and exciting.
Ok, so thats my rant over, hope you keep writing stories like this.
Thanks for a great story so far :)
Regards, sargentaaron2004